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Hey there, Flower! This is a really sweet sonnet and I'm wondering if you've used iambic pentameter with this or not. This being a question because you can't really alter ...

Hey there, I'm sorry I've taken so long to get to this! I'm only looking at this first chapter here so all my comments will be centred on your writing ...

MrM! This makes me very happy to see, I don’t know how to tell you. I feel like this is much better than whatever must have come before it. There’s ...

Hey Jazzeh! Section by section to begin with: i. < “Some” is completely awkward here. Use “a”, it gives the definition your poems needs on a base level. Don’t be ...

Hey there, Benway. I skimmed down the usernames on your reviews so I know you’ve probably got a lot of constructive stuff going on. I haven’t read what they’ve said, ...

Hullo there, I'm sorry it's taken me so long to get to this, although it seems you have a plethora of very helpful, very well chosen reviewers who have given ...

Hey Moro, I’m here to look at this as asked (and expected, I think) but I’m pretty sure now you already know what I’m going to say about this. There ...

MrM, I think the YWS will soon consider my reviews scathing and unkind if people keep posting these kinds of poems for me to review. What have you given me ...

An immediate review, for all my affection. I'm going to assume that MrM's review is incredibly insightful and helpful, because I'm pretty sure I'm not going to be. And I'm ...

Hi Jasmine! I’m afraid I can’t say I enjoyed your piece very much. Not just because your chosen topic is one which is difficult and uncomfortable by nature. Keep in ...

Twitter! I am here. You know I always love reading your work. You have such an excellent grasp on keeping the little details from being mundane. While I could be ...

Hello love! I’m sorry this has taken me so long, I am ridiculously lax. Now, I said in my note that I like this, and I really do. It has ...

Hello precious one! I am here with a review. I’m glad you linked me to this, because it’s as lovely as I remember it being. You have the handle of ...

Ohey, Baer! It’s been some kind of forever since the last time that I saw and read one of your poems, have you not been posting?! Anyway, to the poem ...

Hello there! This is a clever little poem, I must say! I am rather terrible at rhyme myself, so I'm impressed you can pull it off somewhat. That said, I ...