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Hi Apples! So I am reviewing this because I love you! :D I think it's horribly sweet and very, very smooth with imagery. You have an excellent sense of honesty ...

Hey Soulbrother, You've made a bold and I think unwise decision to write this in present tense. Present tense is awkward and unwieldy and really, really hard to write well. ...

Hi Epic! I think you have an interesting beginning here, although I am wondering why it isn't longer. You start to hook us in and by the time I hit ...

Hola, Transcending! Yay for writing poetry, I can see that you've put a whole lot of feeling behind your narrator's emotions and the devotion they have for this person is ...

Lumichu, sugar babe, where you been all my life? Wherever you've been, you've probably been poeting, and I'm finding this a delicious poem for you to return with. This has ...

Hey! So I am back and reviewing this again because you put a thing on my wall! :D Okay! So I like what you've done with this! I'm not sure ...

Hey dogs! So I am not sure if you have the right ratio of example to information here. This is meant to be a response to the prompt about your ...

Hi Nite! This is super cute, more so for understanding the challenge - whoooooa all those points! I think that your lines are a little short. You haven't given this ...

Niagini, my delight! Omnom more of your poetry! Always so lovely to behold I'm happy to be checking out another one of yours. Your first stanza is lovely and almost ...

Oh why hellohello! Thanks for telling me this was here, I get the notification on the Wall thing but sometimes my eyes skim right past! This IS very different to ...

Hi chancesnchanges! This is a really nice sentiment, and I think it's awesome that you're sharing it with the YWS! I think we could benefit from a bit more from ...

Hi Joran! Welcome to the YWS! If you're looking for things to do, don't forget that reviewing is both fun and rewarding! You learn something with every review you do, ...

Hola Joshua! We come to the final installment and I'm glad I got to read this! This is very much a good piece of realistic fiction, with the right kind ...

Hola Joshua! I’m here for the second piece as I promised, maybe a bit sooner than you could have expected, but I won’t judge you for it! I’m liking the ...

Hullo Joshua! I recall reading some of your work some time ago and I'm glad to be able to report an improvement! This is a really good beginning to your ...