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Thanks Buddy! Glad you liked it.

Hey Kitty! As far as spelling goes, I actually did write it in Word first, but for some reason it didn't work. I think someone disabled spell check before I ...

Thanks, Snow! I'm glad you like the poem, and good luck in poetry. If you need any reviews or advice, just let me know!

Hey Dmytra! I feel that they can be both actual demons, such as the ones in Giger's work that this was inspired by, and the leaders of our societies and ...

Oops, I meant the stanzas are 5, 5, 4, 4, etc.

If you really want to know...... he commits suicide. He flies away. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it. I'll definitely post more stuff.

Thanks Retro! I actually did mean to break it up into stanzas, but for whatever reason my computer freaked out on me. I added punctuation in as well. As far ...

Thanks Emjayc!

Thanks Niraco!

Thanks Journey!

Hey Messenger. Thanks for the review! As far as the last stanza, I was trying to say that the narrator was in an airplane and pulling into the airport, the ...

Thanks for the advice Killjoy!

Yeah, I really didn't know what to put for the explanation of the poem, so I just tried to lay out the general idea... but I guess I didn't explain ...

Thanks Dead, and welcome to YWS!

Thanks Change! Glad you liked it.