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Wow...just...wow. That was...wow. Talk about irony. That was fantastic! I also loved the twist at the end, that she imagined that he knew she was dying, after she imagined he ...

That was amazing! I really liked the message of the poem. I also liked how you used figurative language to show the similarities between fear, as well as depression, and ...

Oh...my...god. That was amazing! I have never read a better short story, and this is from someone who usually HATES realistic fiction, no matter how horrific. Just... wow. You really ...

Wow, just... wow. That was great! While I don't quite understand what happened in the story, I think it just adds to the mystery, suspense, and horror of the story. ...

I enjoyed this poem greatly. I, for one, love horses, so I may be just a little bit biased, but I thought it was an excellent poem. I, like MorningStar, ...

This was a great story, and this is from someone who usually hates realistic fiction! I really felt the emotions in the story. Also, all of the similes and metaphors ...

That was a very interesting poem, and definitely in a good way. I loved the double- meaning of smoke, as well as how you used the structure of the poem ...

I have to say, at first, when I started reading this, I thought, "Oh, well, it was an interesting premise, but the author is telling a summary, not a book." ...