PeanutPhoebe

Got it. I think what I was trying to say is to make that more evident. I figured that's what you wanted.

:)

Uhh, sure! Here's a couple links... I'd be happy to review anything else you want done!

Okay, I see what you mean. I was thinking about changing that sentence anyway. But it's deck, not desk:) thanks for the review!

Great, just post a link to my wall, and I'll read/review it

I'll read it!! :)

Ok, that's what I figured:)

Thanks! this was just my rough draft... Actually, I wanted to make it without a lot of conflict, even tho that can make a story better. No, I've never been ...

Thanks! I got this idea, and before I realized it, I had about 800 words!

*gave

Well, I've decided to make a somewhat major change to this. Instead of being a Swedish family, they are going to live in Ireland, which will also change the dates ...

Thank you so much! The titanic has always fascinated me, which is why I chose this:)

well, acutally, the titanic also picked up people from Southampton at a later date, so that's why i did that. I may have researched it wrong, but I'm also a ...