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Re: Take Me Darkness
nice! i love the first two lines "the tears fall from my face, I've fallen from grace" but u maybe shouldve made it "I have fallen from grace" to make ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: My little hold
I loved it! u had great rhymes. i also like the rythm/beat that made it flow effortlessly. i could feel the power behind it as i read it! keep up ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Burning chatper 2
great! i give it 5 stars! cant wait to see wat happens at the picnic thing with anastasia and her dad! good wording too. just to make the chapters a ...
May 18, 2011