PaulClover

This was really good. A nice little introduction to what will surely be a fun (and hopefully finished ;)) story. I really like the dream. Not so much the description, ...

Paul here! Wow, nice story! Depressing, though :( Now I wish I had a puppy to hold. I guess the end of the world isn't always fun and games. In ...

Paul here! Sorry it took me so long to review! Number one, I definitely applaud you for working with another writer. This is probably the bets way to learn compromise ...

Amazing Paul here! Just listened to the song, and I must say you captured the feeling very well. Like the reviewers before me have said, your descriptions are marvelous, and ...

“I’m a comedian , ” said Juliet. “And I make a lot of money, and I make a lot of people laugh.” “Then why are you here?” a sked Dr ...

Paul here! Sorry for the delay! This is incredibly well-written, and file my response to this under "Not Surprised" :). As always, your imagery, grammar, spelling, etc. are fantastic, so ...

Wow...I had no idea. This is an incredible poem, very emotional and full of passion. It feels real in a way that few written things can, and I applaud not ...

Paul here! You've been reviewing my (poorly edited and typo-ridden) stuff for so long, that I thought it was time that I returned the favor by reviewing (and definitely enjoying ...

Paul again :) Another cool chapter! Definitely feels more focused than the last, which is usually how it goes for novels-in-progress. Most of the time, it's not until chapter three ...

This is really beautiful. Makes me want to drive over to my Grandma's house right now and give her a hug. People like Mimi are truly special, the kind of ...

Paul here! This is a cool little first chapter. Interested to see where it goes.,(or if it goes, depending on whether of not you decide to continue.) The most admirable ...

Paul here! Welcome to YWS :) This is a really cool premise, like a mix of X-Men and The Walking Dead . The set-up is incredibly interesting and I applaud ...

I would like to give you an extremely belated welcome to YWS!:) I liked your story, how it offered a brief glimpse at the struggles of a splitting family. I ...

Really neat story. Definitely liked how it was a brief glimpse into the final moments of someone's life, and that the person just happened to be an astronaut. The voice ...

Easily the best part of this was the bedtime stories that the mother tells the daughter. Really fairytale-ish and strangely comforting :) The only REAL criticism I can make is ...