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  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: I had the ‘know it all’ syndrome.

    Dear Rkovono! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! Thank you so much for sharing this essay with us. I like the title very much and the little summary you made. ...

    Feb 6, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: DUMB

    Hi there! First of all, thank you for sharing your writing with us and especially when is based on true events such deep as these. Although it is sad to ...

    Feb 6, 2021
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: First Love (3/3)

    Hi Elinor, Thank you so much for sharing your work! I've read the 3 parts and I think you did a great job keeping the reader interested in the text. ...

    Feb 3, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: We Hire Women Only

    Hi AbduBinSaj8, It took me a while to get the message. It is a surprising piece of writing cause you start reading with one idea in mind and you get ...

    Feb 2, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cursive

    Hi Quennie, thank you for sharing your work. This poem flows really nicely due to the structure you created. My only comment would be on this part: "But you can’t ...

    Feb 2, 2021


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