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Re: Logic. Devoid of logic.
Hey! I'm really sorry it took so long for me to get to this... I'd just like to say first, however, that I never really review poetry. I'll give it ...
Jun 14, 2012 -
Re: Wasn't Mine To Take
I think that that is a great thought to add, though you may still want to reword it a bit just so it flows better and doesn't seem even a ...
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: Wasn't Mine To Take
Hi! Wow, this was really good. It's a great start, and I find myself wanting to read more. However, I did find a few things I should point out. I ...
Mar 2, 2012 -
Re: The Chronicles of the Core: Burns and Bruises- Chapter One
Hi there! Hmmm, this is really good so far, albeit a bit short for a first chapter. I can definitely see this turning into an amazing story. But, I did ...
Feb 25, 2012 - Re: Cherry Pie and Heartache Feb 25, 2012
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Re: Which Way Prologue and Chapter One
Hey again Titan! Sorry it's taken me so long but I'm finally here to drop off the requested review on your edited version! So let's just get started, then... Nit-Picks ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Suite Life of Z&C --- Dark Intentions - Chapters 1 & 2
Hey again! Sorry it took so long for me to review this, but I got a little sidetracked. But here I am! So let's start, shall we? Nit-Picks Mrs. Thomas ...
Oct 23, 2009 -
Re: The Real World - Prologue
Hey guys! Thanks so much for reviewing this. I'm sorry it's so rough and short. Just a little update, I'm probably going to either scrap this alltogether, tie it in ...
Oct 18, 2009 -
Re: Good Books
Ok, yup, I was wrong about where to go for this. Kamas is right! Sorry about that! Maybe I should check over the forums better first next time! :lol: Anyways, ...
Oct 10, 2009 -
Re: Her First Mistake: Part 1
Thank you so so much! I'm revising, editing, finishing etc. right now. I'll post my edited version as soon as I have time. Thanks again! :D
Feb 23, 2009