PatriciaTina

Hey! Here I am to review, as promised! Just to warn you though, I am a huge grammar freak, so there may be a lot of nit-picks. :lol: But anyways, ...

Hey there! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your story tonight! Just beware that I'm a grammar freak, so there may be a lot of nit-picks. But let's begin, shall ...

Hey! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your story today! It might take a bit for me to get all the way to your fourth chapter, but I'll do them ...

Hey again! As promised, here I am to review your second part! So let's get started, shall we? Nit-Picks I look him straight in the eye, waiting for a denial ...

Hi! I'm Trish, and I saw that your second part needs reviews, so I thought I better stop over here first before I go review that! So here we go! ...

Hey! I'm Trish, and I'll be your second reviewer! So let's begin. (Just beware that I'm a grammar freak, so there may be a lot of nit-picks.) But here we ...

Awesome! It's up! Thanks so much for PMing me about it! :D Hehe. Man, I love this story! Anyways, I'll get on with it now. So here we go! Nit-Picks ...

Hey again! Here I am to review as promised! So let's get started! :D Nit-Picks The explosion happens right behind us. I close my eyes. I can feel the heat ...

Hey! I usually like to read the beginnings of stories before I read and review the second part, so here I am. I noticed that you don't have any reviews ...

Hey again! I'm here to review your second part! So let's get started! Nit-Picks “Anna!” Maryanne called. “Honey, I’m going to get Chinese. You want to come?” Maryanne? Wouldn't she ...

Hey again! I'm here to review your second chapter! So here we go! :D Nit-Pick So you think that it would a while at least, to find Mr Right. A ...

Hey there! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing your story this evening! Just beware that I like to nit-pick. So let's get started! :D Nit-Picks “Stay,” she whispers but he ...

Hey Empress! I see that I'm a bit late, but I'll still try my best to give you a good review. It may be a bit short though. But here ...

Hey there! I'm Trish, and I'll be reviewing this piece today! So why don't we get started. Just beware that I'm a bit of a grammar freak, so there might ...

Haha! That's awesome! Great job! But empress is partly right. It definitely could have been worse! (Though I actually don't know how... Maybe take her advice! :smt005) Anyways, I hope ...