PatriciaTina

I really like the style you wrote this in. It's sort of like a cross between poetry and fiction. Anyways, because I like to review, and when I review, I ...

Hey! I really like the story, but there's a few things that you should look into. Beware though, I do nit-pick a lot. :D Anyways, on with the review! I ...

Hi! I'm here to give my review, so here goes! (Beware of the nit-picks though!) :lol: She glanced irritably over at the grand father clock in the corner of the ...

Hi! Here's your review, nitpicks and all! :D That was about to change, I decided as I took a wears look down the short staircase and into the basement tunnels. ...

Oh, I know a ton of great books. Here are some to start off with. They all have a bit of romance, but they're not totally about romance. They're also ...

Oooohh! You like the mortal instruments too? I love them! City of Glass is going to be amazing, don't you think? Just out of curiosity, at the end of City ...

Wow! I love it! Well, since you've done such an awesome job, I probably won't have that much to comment on, but I'll try! Here it goes. Well, except her ...

I really liked your poem, even though I am a twilight fan. I totally agree that she is so annoying! Like, Midnight Sun would have probably been at least a ...

So, first I would like to say that I am really picky when it comes to grammar etc., so beware. :lol: Anyways, here it goes. I froze, and listened with ...

Hi! I think that you did a pretty good job with the story, but it's a bit confusing at times. I made Mr. Peterson turn around and stare at the ...