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I'm Not Afraid To Be Who I am

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Paper Planes (Ch6)

    Hey, xJupiter! YES, THEY SURVIVED!! Ok. So, onto the mini review. I liked this chapter. I appreciated the awkwardness, being a very awkward person myself. I liked the idea of ...

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two

    Ok, I hope I wasn't blunt about anything, because this was a really good chapter :)

    Sep 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    :D Hmm... Well then, now you owe yourself a hug, since you slapped yourself.

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    Thank so much!! I'll definitely keep that tip in mind!! :D

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    No, Nobody Slap ThePhoenix!! It's perfectly fine, I understand that you were busy, :) Thanks so much for the review, and I'll make sure to fix all those mistakes. And ...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    ignore my above thing, it seems you've edited now.

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    I'm a bit confused...? This seems like you've copied someone else's post from a completely different story and posted it here, or something like that...

    Sep 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review! For Jim and the Newspaper, I totally just realized I forgot to explain that part well. It's actually a flyer (I don't know why I put ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: As the fire burns

    Haha, it's ok, don't worry about it. :)

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2

    Thanks for the review! I've always thought "anyways" was a word, xD. I'll make sure to fix the typos and grammar things. :D

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1

    Thank you! I will fix those typos. As for the tense thing, I'm really trying. I re-read my chapters over and over and I personally understand it, but I also ...

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 1 *

    Haha, it's fine! Ooh, I'm excited!

    Sep 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1

    Thank you for the review, and welcome to YWS!! I do hope that I can develop Josh well as the story goes on, and pick up the pace! The first ...

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.3

    Aw, thanks! And that'd be awesome! :D

    Sep 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1

    Haha, I'm glad it makes more sense now! :D

    Sep 4, 2015


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality