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Re: Paper Planes (Ch6)
Hey, xJupiter! YES, THEY SURVIVED!! Ok. So, onto the mini review. I liked this chapter. I appreciated the awkwardness, being a very awkward person myself. I liked the idea of ...
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Return of Magic Part One Capter Four:A Street Performance Goes Horribly Wrong pt. Two
Ok, I hope I wasn't blunt about anything, because this was a really good chapter :)
Sep 18, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
:D Hmm... Well then, now you owe yourself a hug, since you slapped yourself.
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
Thank so much!! I'll definitely keep that tip in mind!! :D
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
No, Nobody Slap ThePhoenix!! It's perfectly fine, I understand that you were busy, :) Thanks so much for the review, and I'll make sure to fix all those mistakes. And ...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
ignore my above thing, it seems you've edited now.
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
I'm a bit confused...? This seems like you've copied someone else's post from a completely different story and posted it here, or something like that...
Sep 17, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
Thanks for the review! For Jim and the Newspaper, I totally just realized I forgot to explain that part well. It's actually a flyer (I don't know why I put ...
Sep 16, 2015 -
Re: As the fire burns
Haha, it's ok, don't worry about it. :)
Sep 15, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 2
Thanks for the review! I've always thought "anyways" was a word, xD. I'll make sure to fix the typos and grammar things. :D
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Thank you! I will fix those typos. As for the tense thing, I'm really trying. I re-read my chapters over and over and I personally understand it, but I also ...
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: Heartbeat Academy: Chapter 1 *
Haha, it's fine! Ooh, I'm excited!
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Thank you for the review, and welcome to YWS!! I do hope that I can develop Josh well as the story goes on, and pick up the pace! The first ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: The Guardians- Chapter 1.3
Aw, thanks! And that'd be awesome! :D
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Magic Awaits You -- Chapter 1
Haha, I'm glad it makes more sense now! :D
Sep 4, 2015
