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Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 13.1
Hiya, Querencia. Pan back for another critique. Same drill as usual; comments as I go along and small grammatical suggestions in blue . The four of them in the car ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 27
Hi, BlueAfrica! Pan dropping in for a quick review. First reaction: YES KIERNAN IS BACK That's out of my system now, so let's go. Small Comments The beast had curled ...
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Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 12.3
Hi, Querencia! Pan back again for another review. The darkness slid out fast as anything; it seemed to Finnley like an unfurling scroll, but by no means a pleasant one. ...
Feb 2, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 12.2
Hi, Querencia. This'll be my last review of the night - and my 300th review of all time! Quite the honour to meet such a milestone by way of your ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 12.1
Hii, Querencia. You can't get rid of me. I'm like a limpet. :1 New Comment: "Take a chill pill. Relax. Would you rather face your mother if she found out ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 11.2
Hiya, Querencia. Excuse me while I pop in for another review. "It was never the same again, between us. No matter how I tried to make it up, there are ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 11.1
Hi, Querencia. Pan dropping in for another review. I really am a bit of a snail when it comes to getting through these chapters - stuff always seems to get ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: At the End of the Road
Hi, Cinderquill! Pan dropping in for a quick review. Because this is so short, I'm just going to work through this piece as I read it and give you my ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: 1680 words from page 275 of ma book
Hiya, Jyva. Pan here to review as promised. I don't really have any nitpicks for this piece so I'm going to keep my comments on the more general side, explaining ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 9 of Princess of the Sea
Hi, lelu. Pan back for another review. I've skimmed over the last chapter just to get a sense of what happened, so I'm in pretty good stead to review this ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 7 of Princess of the Sea
Hi, Lelu. Pan dropping in for another review. I've still not read all of the earlier chapters, but I'll continue on from what I know from chapter 6 and try ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 14.2: Ilami
Hi, Lightsong. I think my review team has very little chance of catching up now, but at least I'm getting up to date with things! Small Comments A few, most ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 14.1: Ilami
Hi, Lightsong. Happy Review Day! Pan dropping in for another review. Same drill as usual. Small Comments He didn’t need anything - his fists alone were his strongest arsenals . ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Black Butler with a Twist (S1 E5: His Butler, Chance Encounter)
Hi, izanami! Wow, it's going to take me a long time to get used to that name change. Still, I thought I'd drop in and offer my first review to ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 26.2
Hi, BlueAfrica. Pan dropping in for another review. Small Comments Edna poked Clem’s shoulder. “Care to introduce me?” “Yeah, sorry.” She straightened, brushing dried mud from her shirt. “
Jan 28, 2018