Panikos

Hi again! I thought I'd drop in and review the next chapter as well. Some small comments first: Esther and I both sit up, see each other, jump, and settle ...

Hiya, Moalex! Just dropping in for a quick review. I seem to remember reviewing chapter 3, so I have a rudimentary impression of the story and the characters, so I'll ...

Hiya, sasha_bumble_bee! I haven't read the first chapter of this, but I thought I'd still drop in for a review. I really, really enjoyed this. You have such a strong ...

Hiya Elinor! Just dropping in for another quick review. The title of this piece brings to mind those cringe Charlie the Unicorn videos, so I'm trying badly not to think ...

Hiya, Anamel! I haven't read any other chapters of this, but I thought I'd drop in with a quick review even so. There are definitely strengths in this piece, but ...

Hiya, LordStar. Poetry isn't my usual haunt, but I thought I'd drop in for a quick critique even so. The best thing about this poem is the imagery. There are ...

Hi, TheSilverFox! Just dropping in for a quick review. I don't read or critique a lot of poetry, but I found this to be a really fun piece. The first ...

Hiya, qbidmead! Just dropping in for a quick review! So, this piece is a bit of a mixed bag for me. I'm going to start with the criticisms, just to ...

Hiya, AmadeusW! Just dropping in for a quick review. This is a pretty long chapter. I reckon it could be cut into two chapters, actually - one based around the ...

Hiya, Elinor! I thought I'd drop in and review the next bit. Small Comments “Is your father home?” S he asked. Just watch your punctuation. 'She' shouldn't have a capital ...

Hiya, Elinor! Dropping in for a quick review. As always with your work, this has its unique sense of nostalgia and melancholy. You capture Michelle's loneliness and wistfulness really well; ...

Hiya, Bisc! Thought I'd drop in and help you shift this from the Green Room. I've not read any other chapters of this, but I'm vaguely familiar with the premise, ...

Hiya, Justlittleoleme2! It's been too long! I thought I'd drop in for a quick review to see how this story has changed. Small Comments Indeed, that is where both their ...

Hiya, AndName! Just dropping in for a quick review. I haven't read the first chapter of this, but I'll do my best to make this critique helpful. Mellifera has already ...

Hiya, Emma the empty! Just dropping in for a quick review. This is quite a hard piece to critique because it's clearly very personal. You've certainly captured the torment of ...