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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 31.2
Yo, BlueAfrica. Don't mind if I review. Small Comments The ringing of Clem's cell phone woke Edna long before breakfast. Or rather the singing of her cell phone, which did ...
Apr 8, 2018 -
Re: Another Day of Girl Talking
Hi, Kanome! Pan dropping in to polish off the last of my five promised reviews. I hope they've been helpful so far. As this is a pretty short piece, I'm ...
Apr 5, 2018 -
Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter Four]
Hiya, Kanome! Just popping in for another review. Same drill as usual - small comments, overall comments, grammatical corrections in blue . If she is right, then I ’m not ...
Apr 5, 2018 -
Re: A Space Escape
Hiya, alliyah! Here to review as promised. I'm going to start this critique with small comments and then round off at the end with my overall impressions. Small grammatical corrections ...
Apr 3, 2018 -
Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter Three]
Hiya, Kanome. Pan here to review again. Same drill as usual: specific comments, overall thoughts, grammatical corrections in blue . Yusse Moe I can’t believe this pipsqueak called me a ...
Apr 2, 2018 -
Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter Two]
Hiya, Kanome. Just dropping in to review another chapter. Same drill as last time; I'll comment as I read and round off with some overall impressions. Grammar corrections will be ...
Apr 1, 2018 -
Re: Six Month Journey [Chapter One] - Edited
Hiya Kanome! I thought I'd get stuck straight in with doing the five reviews I owe you. As this is a fairly short piece, I'm just going to read through ...
Mar 30, 2018 -
Re: Speak Your Mind
Hiya, heyguysitnicole! Pan dropping in to fry up a quick review. First, I think this is a really neat concept - it's not something I've seen on YWS before and ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 27.2
Hiiya, Querencia. Just dropping in for a quick review. It was still Mia, his brave, beautiful friend, but a light had gone out of her. She was different, and it ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Curi and the Dream Boy Ch.1 pt 1
Hiya, Dest! Happy Review Day! I'm Pan and I'll be frying up a quick review for you today. I'm just going to read through the piece and comment on things ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 31.1
Hiya, BlueAfrica. Just sliding on in for another review. Small Comments It had been easy to shake off Jada—never mind the fact that Clem obviously would have preferred not to— ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 27.1
Yooo, Querencia. I've done it! I'm actually up to date! Or I will be once I actually finish writing this review. When he did, he sat up straighter and stumbled ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 26.3
Hiya, Querencia! Let's see if I can get completely up to date with this novel before the end of Review Day! It's been a long time coming. The idea of ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 26.2
Hiya, Querencia. Pan dropping in for another review. He had been through these adventures -- through these terrors, and what did he have to show for it? Nothing. Life went ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 26.1
Hiya, Querencia! I'm in no-review territory??? Who'd've thunk it? This will actually be my 350th review, so I must say I'm delighted to claim my first blue star by critiquing ...
Mar 17, 2018
