Panikos

Hi, Danni88! Pan dropping in for a quick review. As this is such a short chapter, I'm just going to work through it chronologically and give you my thoughts and ...

Hiya, Blue! Back again and actually up to date. :) Small Comments rolled over now and then to wretch over the side of the carpet I think it should be ...

Hello hello hello, Blue. I'm gradually clawing my way back to being up to date with this - though with the rate you're writing at, I'm not sure how long ...

Hiya, Blue! Back again. I read this a while ago, but the memory of my excitement when I saw Kiernan's name is still fresh in my mind. My boy is ...

Hiya Lightsong! I read this a few days back but it's taken me a little while to get round to reviewing it. Let's get started. Small Comments It was Aleveri ...

Hiya, Blue! If only I could review these chapters as fast as you can write them! I'm getting serious reviewing fatigue at the moment, but I'm determined not to let ...

Hiya, alliyah! A million apologies that it's taken me so long, but I'm finally here to complete the third review I owed you. Better late than never, I guess? :P ...

Hiya, Lumos! Pan dropping in for a quick review. I'm going to address all of your questions, but I'll expand on them and offer some other thoughts and advice. Overall, ...

Hiya, Light! Back again to review. Same drill as usual, with small grammatical corrections shown in blue . Small Comments ‘Sadly, only a few are like me.’ Because 'a few' ...

Hiya, Lightsong. Just dropping in for a review. I'll preface this by saying I'm glad you're going to raise the characters' ages in future drafts. I always had difficulty picturing ...

Hiya, Blue. Just popping in for a critique on this fine Review Day. Small Comments she shuddered and cried and got snot all over him and felt bad about getting ...

Hiya, Querencia! I'll be glad to be up to date with this again. A little ways into his lunch period, where he sat picking at his bland food What kind ...

Hi, Querencia. Popping in for another review. Finnley remembered that he was about to laugh at her for listening to the radio Why? It's not that uncommon. Does he think ...

Hiya, Querencia! Happy Review Day! At the very least, I'm going to use today to get up to date with your lovely novel. Still, the after-school punishment was more tedious ...

Hi, Querencia! Dropping in for another review. they all trooped back into the dean’s office and he was left alone in the waiting room, still angry at the other students ...