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Re: Vyheria - Chapter 6
Hiya, Sheyren! Back again. Just a heads up, but any minor grammatical corrections will be shown in blue from now on. It's just for the stuff that's too small to ...
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Re: Vyheria - Chapter 5
Hiya, Sheyren! Back again. I'm steadily catching up now. Small Comments His body was large, and his movements clunky, like he had been put together rather than naturally grew that ...
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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 51
Hello, Blue! Just dropping in to review and keep on top of my revmo goals. Small Comments Kiernan. Well—he'd think about that all later. Right now he had a real ...
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Re: Vyheria - Chapter 4
Hiya, Sheyren. Back again to review. Small Comments Its light glossed over the room, the bunk bed, the two chairs and small table, and the wall to the changing closet. ...
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Re: Vyheria - Chapter 3
Hiya, Sheyren! Sorry it's been such ages. I thought I'd take advantage of #revmo to finally catch up with this story. Small Comments Navarre returned his attention to the footrace ...
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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 50
Hiya, Blue. Chapter 50! We must be on the home straight now. It's amazing to think how long I've been following this story, even if I haven't been there from ...
Sep 1, 2018 -
Re: Fireworks
Hey, Taleof6kids! I'm Pan, and a happy review day to you. I this has been kicking around in the Green Room for quite a while, so I thought I'd drop ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: [Outsiders] Chapter 2
Hiya, HollyM64! I've not read the first chapter of this but I noticed it's been hanging around in the Green Room for some time, so I though I'd drop in ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Eos, Chapter 5.1: Back on the Job
Hey, Mea! Happy Review Day to you. Good to see a new chapter of this. Small Comments Underneath him, the hoverjet shudder into landing mode. Tense slippage. Technically, it was ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 49.2
Hiya, Blue! Happy Review Day to you. Small Comments Edna came to in a bed, in a room dimly lit by white orbs drifting gently along the ceiling. Her glasses ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 49.1
Hiya, Blue! Here I am, getting in early because I'm still excited about this twist and the fact that I guessed right. Small Comments he'd seemed to sense the imminent ...
Aug 22, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 20.2: Ilami
Hi, Lightsong! Dropping in for another review. Small corrections in blue , like always. Small Comments Mr. Haifei announced ‘And the victory goes to Ilami’ with a dead voice, underwhelming ...
Aug 22, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 48.2
Hey, Blue! I'm back again, trying to be good and stay on top of my reviews. I'm going to be doing a lot of freaking out and blind praising in ...
Aug 20, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 48.1
Yo, Blue. I'm going to catch up with this before I let myself write the next part of A Pocketful of Posies. I meant to do so hours ago, but ...
Aug 20, 2018 -
Re: The Equator in Zhulong 2.2
Hiya, Pompadour! Really sorry it's been so long. Of all the chapters I've been reviewing and catching up on, this is probably my favourite. This story is really getting interesting ...
Aug 17, 2018
