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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Geisha

    I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. It is more of an emotion striking poem than visually striking. My goal was to strike the emotions more than paint a picture. :)

    Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:19 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Geisha

    I will definitely work on it. :) thank you very much. It will be hard for me, because I am more of an emotional and spiritual conduit than a visual ...

    Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:18 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Geisha

    Thank you very much. I will consider all that you have said. : ) Fixed that typo. : ) This piece is one of my earlier ones. Not my first ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 4:01 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: It Will Hurt

    This poem is very deep. I can feel the speakers pain. The pain in this poem is properly and well portrayed. Very good with this poem. I really like it. ...

    Fri Jun 15, 2012 1:09 am
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Love of Apollo and Nyx

    Thank you very much. I take what you said into heart. : ) I was actually considering writing another poem about Apollo and Nyx of how they fell in love ...

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:44 pm
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The Love of Apollo and Nyx

    Thank you so very much. Your kind words mean the world to me. I'm very happy you enjoyed.

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:39 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Jane

    Sorry to put this twice. This was meant to be a review.

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:57 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Jane

    Sorry to put this twice. This was meant to be a review.

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:57 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Jane

    This is really cool. : ) I like the thought you put into it and reminds me of a combo of Tim Burton and Edgar Allen Poe. The meter it ...

    Thu Jun 14, 2012 2:56 am


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn