PandorasChild

Hey Hey :) This was good and although I didnt quite understand (sorry, in a bit of a rush) I caught the basic feeling. I adore this.. "Remember that time ...

Good Morning :) I enjoyed this although I was not too sure what a Schmetterling was? But after reading the previous review, ping! it is in fact a butterfly :) ...

hey man! awesome piece you have here! very lighthearted way to look at a very heavy topic. I enjoyed looking at it your way. dude! change your verb 'got' in ...

Hello hello :) You asked so nicely, and in honour of review Sunday, here I am! I read the preface and the previous two chapters. Out of all of them ...

Hello there fellow Saffa :) kiff piece you have here bru ;) ok enough with the colloquialism, this was good :) a few fast paced moments you've caught and displayed ...

Hello Hello :) I liked this, the idea of a female assassin, and also the adoptive evil relationship with her father who makes her do things because she doesn't know ...

This was wonderful. Your use of words is fantastic. I had to read it slowly and thoroughly, which made me appreciate it so much more. I especially liked the origami ...

Hello :) So I don't do poetry either, so this may be a little like the blind leading the blind, but ill try my best :) I kindve understood the ...

hey hey :) ok i liked your idea :) sort of fantasy version of interracial love, but the angel/demon factor makes it that much more interesting. I think it has ...

Hello titan :) I like it for some one of your age :) you've got a very interesting story with a lot of potential. When ever one of your characters ...

Hello :) it was very.. Pretty. And colourful.. Purples and flowers and words like "bright" and "explode." It didn't however create much of an emotional response, I wasn't interested to ...

HELLO :) wow. I loved the length, its just pure emotion, just pure food to feed off of. I devoured it, and like every good thing in this world, it ...

Hello there :) Haha I'm just going to sneak in and leave you something small, your first few posts and everyone has (lovingly??) Bombarded you with novels of reviews! :) ...

Hey hey! So I really enjoyed this, everyone has basically nitpicked it to shreds so I'm not going to add much more, something that I LOVED was the colour :) ...

Hey Blackbird! Wow.. This poen really hit me, I really felt it. My wrists were turning themselves inside out, your imagery left me breathless, Had to read it a few ...