Palip

Well, this is...long. I suppose I'd better sit back and relax :P. Here goes: Refus was far too good of a friend to let go Hmm...I'm not too sure about ...

Hello there, Palip to review. I actually read this piece before deciding to criticise (reason being I found it short enough for a little leisurely reading). I apologise to you ...

Hello there MorningMist, Palip to review for you :). If you don't mind, I'll be reviewing this as I go along, so pardon my pointing out any "mistakes" resolved later ...

Ok so...sorry, I just couldn't resist putting in a little review. I am totally your number one follower. Your work is so unique, so original, so different. It's amazingly refreshing ...

I STRONGLY recommend you stop this. I'm sorry, I just can't keep writing a review for every excellent piece of writing you create. You waste too much of my time. ...

So, hello once again Ranger xP. I am aware that you have abandoned this project. However, since you pointed out that this chapter "sucked" I decided to check it out. ...

Hi there RangerHawk :)). I was randomly browsing through members' pages (yes I know, shame on me for procrastinating when I should be studying), when I came across your page ...

haha MY was this horrible :P. As the others pointed out, an excellent job including most (if not all) of the clichés one expects to find in such a story. ...

Hi there, Palip to review. I'm going to review as I go along, I hope you don't mind. So, here goes: Athena's silvery loom clicked back and forth and Calypso ...

All I can say is...WOW. One of the most original and ingenous ideas I have ever seen written down. I actually smiled at the W.R.I.T.E.R.S. definition of each letter...however the ...

I'm going to review this as I go along, so I could at least try to give you a thorough review. I know that Kaf covered most of the points, ...

This has to be one of the best stories on YWS, if not THE best. Admittedly, I have not read all the works on the site, but this just makes ...

To Sionarama; you said "If I could, I'd delete it." This was perhaps the reason I'm writing this review. First of all, your story is NOT boring. It just needs ...

Wow..this is amazing. To be honest, I have not read Part I and Part II, but if I may judge from this one alone, they are..intriguing to say the least. ...

I really like this piece. Usually, I'm not into stories which involve the "modern" world (taking into account your story, I am referring to the cars) but this one is ...