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Re: Making The Most of Teenage
I think every teen should read this. Tis is true. There are only little itty bitty minor mistakes. You indented only the first paragraph, and left the others be. You ...
Nov 7, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 2
Wow, this is an interesting story. I can't find many things to correct (probably because my brother won't leave me alone) but I did find a few mistakes. 'The Bible ...
Nov 6, 2014 -
Re: A New Sunrise
Whoa, this is cool. I've always wanted to read a story that's like this, (no kidding) and now I've found it. I was immediately drawn in by the name. I ...
Nov 5, 2014 -
Re: If all else fails... (Chapter 1)-I might make it a little bit longer please leave suggestions
Very interesting, and I thought it was descriptive too. And I like how you ended with the cliffhanger. But the question, 'who are the dream catchers?' kept on repeating in ...
Nov 5, 2014