Pacific_Sky14

Wow, this i really good. The last sentence was perfect ! I really liked how you explained your feelings of fear. I even liked how the enemy was your clothes ...

I really liked this one. The only thing that bothered me was the first paragraph, or the second and last sentence. Other than that, I think your work was well ...

I really like how you introduced us to the the story. I love how you put in the right amount of details. The only thing that bothers me is that ...

The beginning paragraphs a little, confused me on setting... But I really liked how you put in how he felt during when he was afraid or powerless in powerful situations. ...