PWeezyBaby1

This peom was short, but powerful! Your flow seemed extremely well written! I completely loved it!! You said that this wasn't your best work, well then I want to read ...

Besides the few gramatical errors, which i think that capatalizing a peom and making sure that its grammatically correct is kinda senseless, this poem was amazing. It was deep and ...

your writing style is amazing, you had unique ways of filling in your sentences and making them whole. those unique styles are what makes amaing writers!!

this poem was incredible, but i think you could expand more, but this is your poem and if you dont know that its still amazing

the poem had a lot of strong deep emotions!!!! thats what made it so amazing!!!!!

like the others have said, you have some slight grammer errors, but other than that this poem was amazing! i loved it!

This poem was amazing. I loved every line, the sense of that day came back to me, and i got to see a glimpse of a heors perspective, who acted ...