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I'm still kind of new, but I know that this dosen't belong here. I would go get a mod to move this probably to the lounge or somewhere more appropriate.

Hello again Kyousuke! I'm here to review yet again. :D First, the script, dialogue didn't work. It was almost unorganized looking and drew too much attention and confusion. I'd stick ...

What I meant was, from what you described, Damon's *looks* were perfect. (; And thanks for the prolouge. It does explain some things a little more. Glad my review helped!

I'm sorry that I didn't answer you! This guy is actually a girl! ^_^ Also, when I was working on the 'revised' version, I considered dropping this entire prolouge and ...

Thank you all so much for your reveiws! (: I appreciate you, Lorril, for giving me stuff to work on. I see where you're coming from. ^_^ Well, except for ...