OynxFire

Hi there! Oynx here to give ya a review! :) First. I just want to say that I really liked your story. Very much. :) It caught my attention immediatly ...

Hey there Oynx here to give you a review! I read through this confused nearly the entire time. I mean, the girl is confused, asking what this guy is and ...

Hi there! Oynx here to give you a review. First, you had a very boring way of presenting your story. It got a little better as you went on, but ...

Hi there! Oynx here to review! :D First, your beginning was pretty funny. The way you described the gym teacher - priceless! :D However, I think that you went a ...

Hey! I'm Oynx here to give you a review! :D First, it dragged on without any description. Now, I'm a little biased because I am a sucker for description, but ...

Hello, I'm OynxFire and I am ready to review this! First off, I'm not going to correct your grammar because I'm afraid that I might accidentally try to correct you ...

Hi there! OynxFire ready to review. (: Now, I'll start with your first paragraph. I read through it and frankly, I was amazed at the description you used to to ...

Alright, this is my first review so here goes. (: The first thing I noticed when I read this piece was the lack of description. It just keep going without ...