OxfordandOnyx

Hi there, I'm OxfordandOnyx and I just thought I might as well read and review your story! (: Okay, so your opening line.... Due to some mix-up, an unimportant target ...

Hey there! I'm OxfordandOnyx... Just thought I would drop in a review! (: First of all, I have a few nit-picks. The first paragraph is off-putting for me. You have ...

Hi Mo, it's me again OxfordandOnyx... Here to review! (: First off, I am happy to see you took more of my advice and started a separate line for each ...

Hi again, this is OxfordandOnyx! I was pleasantly surprised this morning to see you made some adjustments to your story, I think you took on the crit very well and ...

Hi, I'm OxfordandOnyx, just read your story and thought I might as well drop a small review. It's kinda late now so it might not be very detailed, as I'm ...

Hello, this is OxfordandOnyx (: Just thought I would drop a small review as I see the potential in this story even though it is only a porlouge! Why could ...

Hi, I'm OxfordandOnyx and I'll just be dropping in my little review (: First off, why say your own work is 'terrible', say that and other won't bother reading it! ...

Hi there, I'm OxfordandOnyx. Here's my review! Your opening line is very good, I like the use of the word 'conquered', it helps paint a picture of the rain pelting ...

Hi there! I'm OxfordandOnyx and I just thought I'd drop a review! First off, I don't like the opening line at all, just drop the 'and', I know you were ...

Hello there (: Nice little story you've made up here So, I just thought I would drop in a small review! So, your main character's best friend died eight years ...

This is an interesting piece of work and you use great descriptive sentences. A few nit-picks. "Behind me, way too close behind me..." Try deleting the 'way', it sounds very ...

Hi there (: I just thought I would quickly read your story and I am very glad I did. I find this story to be very different from others I ...

Hi, it's OxfordandOnyx again... I am glad you posted this next chapter up so quickly, I was looking forward to having a read (: Unfortunately, I'm in a rush so ...

Hi, I'm OxfordandOnyx (: I'll just drop a review in seeing as I really like romance stories! (: Ok, so first. The opening line was great, it immediately hooked me ...

Hi there I'm OxfordandOnyx... I thought I might just post you a little review (: I liked this story but I do have some issues (: Plot The plot so ...