Otterpop

I'm glad to see this story garnered some interest in you! Also thankful to see feedback from various types of readers. You do make a couple of good points for ...

As before, I appreciate the review you've left behind! Whether it was for every chapter so far or just a couple, I am at least glad to hear you are ...

Every little bit counts if it helps to improve my writing, portions that don't make sense, et cetera. I definitely appreciate all kinds of feedback including the little bits, and ...

As always, you catching on to a couple of little details is most helpful! You caught onto a couple of things that did not surprise me, but there were a ...

Thanks so much for the compliment. I'm glad you think so!

Many thanks for the review! I was glad to see you come back to this. The strengths you mentioned really are appreciated, and there are even a couple of points ...

Your advice definitely helped! Don't know how I missed some of these little grammatical errors, but thank goodness for people like you that catch on to them! I also love ...

Many thanks for the nitpicks! Clearly I always need to watch out for little grammatical things, and it's thanks to people like you that can watch out for them so ...

I always love seeing people catching me on the little details that may need to be fixed, so many thanks for that! And of course, I do like seeing people ...

No worries about the weird symbols! I was able to extrapolate what I needed. Your suggestion about how I incorporate the age is actually a very good idea! I'll have ...

Nothing too harsh at all! I enjoy criticisms and critiques, and trust me, yours was very tame compared to many others I've received on other works! I'll be sure to ...

Your rule of thumb is something I definitely need to keep an eye out for. This actually helps when a single person reads a variety of excerpts of my writing; ...

Your comments and feedback are most appreciated! Clearly I seem to have strengths but also some things to look out for, which I most certainly will! Some of that information ...

Well then! Wasn't expecting a review but I am glad to hear you did read through the first chapter! I'm glad to know that for the most part, I started ...

Thanks so much for the review! I will say after reading your comments that a few things were absolutely intentional, but a couple of things I'll need to reword, rewrite, ...