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Re: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate: Part Two
Hey there! Otterpop here with a review! Your depiction of what Hell is like already stands out, and it's really neat. Everyone definitely does think of all the fire and ...
May 7, 2025 -
Re: The Fall - Chapters 5-7
Hey there! Otterpop with a review! First off, I'll let you know that my feedback only really applies to Chapter 5; there's a lot of text here and it can ...
May 6, 2025 -
Re: Rekindle the Flame, Chapter II: Under the Radar
Hey there! Otterpop here with a review for ya! I must say that I was immediately hooked from the first few paragraphs! I was initially very confused when you mentioned ...
May 5, 2025 -
Re: The Aristocrat, The Bandits, The Chalice. Chapter Three
Hello there! Otterpop here with a review! So this is my first time reading any of your works (related to The Aristocrat or otherwise) but I must say that I ...
May 5, 2025 -
Re: Before the Dragon - 1.1
Heya Shady! It's been a while but I'm here and looking forward to reviewing Before the Dragon! Mostly I'm excited to know the original story and get some more backstory ...
Mar 14, 2023 -
Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 3.2
Hiya Shady! Otterpop here with another review! I gotta say, the conversation between Jerica and Derik hits really hard in a lot of ways. For one thing my parents have ...
Jan 16, 2023 -
Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 3.1
Heya Shady! Otterpop here with a quick review! It's been a while but I hope that I am able to provide some valuable feedback for this. I actually had to ...
Jan 3, 2023 -
Re: The path of Youth
Heya there. I was looking through some Green Room works and noticed this has been here for a long while without any feedback or reviews. I haven't read poetry in ...
Oct 26, 2022 -
Re: Among the Dragons - Chapter 2.1
Hiya Shady! It's been a real long while but I noticed that (a) you tagged me in a post where you mentioned you had some new material for this up ...
Oct 26, 2022 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 7.1
Heya Harry! Otterpop here with a quick review! As I was reading this I really couldn't find anything major to talk about, so I'll just bring up some quick nitpicks ...
Jun 16, 2022 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 41
Heya felistia! Otterpop here with hopefully a helpful review! Okay, so I think it took me a little too long (based on previous reviews and skimming through some of the ...
Jun 10, 2022 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 6.2
Heya there Harry! Otterpop here with a quick review! Everyone did as they were told. Jessica raised her arms and began the complex unlocking charm, grey light forming glowing numbers ...
Jun 10, 2022 -
Re: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 6.1
Heya Harry! So since a lot of these have plenty of reviews already I won't go quite as in-depth with some of my reviews for these chapters/sections (I could end ...
Jun 8, 2022 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Irish Prayer
Hello there! Noticed this didn't have any reviews and thought I'd help, especially if you're looking to put more of this up at some point! You've definitely got an intriguing ...
Jun 6, 2022 -
Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 38
Hey there! Otterpop here with another review! You've still got some works in the Green Room and despite not having any prior knowledge of this story I'd still like to ...
Jun 3, 2022
