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Oswin

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: mint and bad breath

    This was awesome, and you should keep writing poetry! Ok, now that that's out of my system, I have a few more comments. First of all, I am pretty sure ...

    Apr 7, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Physical Violence

    Honestly, this was amazing. If this is a personal experience, I am so sorry. But, this was really descriptive. you should submit it to an anti child abuse website, if ...

    Apr 7, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Drug called Ignoring

    wow. this is amazing. is there some place on this site to nominate poems for "mass recognition"? because, if there is, i need to show them this. i enjoyed reading ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: Whomerlock: A Fanfiction

    first off, thank you! i love all 3 of those BBC shows, and i hope you continue. i haven't seen merlin yet, but am assuming that it will come later. ...

    Nov 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Writing Practise #1

    this is a great plot, and one of the only things that i have to say you should improve is wording. for example: "any anymore". another piece of constructive judgement ...

    Nov 1, 2014
  • Other » Fanfiction, General Re: 15 Reasons Why Daleks Don't Have Showers

    Geronimo! that was fantastic! i thought that i was a rare sight; a girl that likes doctor who. i am new to this site, and i think that you were ...

    Oct 31, 2014


If you can't get out of your comfort zone, you'll never find what you're looking for. Don't make things quick and easy to feel better short term. Make a change and then you'll feel better longer term.
— Frinderman