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Re: mint and bad breath
This was awesome, and you should keep writing poetry! Ok, now that that's out of my system, I have a few more comments. First of all, I am pretty sure ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Physical Violence
Honestly, this was amazing. If this is a personal experience, I am so sorry. But, this was really descriptive. you should submit it to an anti child abuse website, if ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Drug called Ignoring
wow. this is amazing. is there some place on this site to nominate poems for "mass recognition"? because, if there is, i need to show them this. i enjoyed reading ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: Whomerlock: A Fanfiction
first off, thank you! i love all 3 of those BBC shows, and i hope you continue. i haven't seen merlin yet, but am assuming that it will come later. ...
Nov 26, 2014 -
Re: Writing Practise #1
this is a great plot, and one of the only things that i have to say you should improve is wording. for example: "any anymore". another piece of constructive judgement ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: 15 Reasons Why Daleks Don't Have Showers
Geronimo! that was fantastic! i thought that i was a rare sight; a girl that likes doctor who. i am new to this site, and i think that you were ...
Oct 31, 2014
