Orinette

I know this is a rather perverted look at the whole thing, but as I was reading this piece, all I could think of was the "Sexual Education" sketch from ...

Ah, how many times I've tried to get my own creation stories off the ground... :) This was reeeeeaaallly good! I have no real nitpicks; it flowed very nicely and ...

Hey, Hawk! I thought I'd repay you for your lovely comments on my work with a few on yours - luckily for you, this piece is freaking awesome! ;) Good ...

Very nice! I'll talk about your dialogue in a moment, but first, here are some niggly little criticisms: The way it always seems ready and able to help navigate me ...

Oh, yay! I'm really enjoying this story - and I know what you mean about long chapters! Mine have been pretty concise, lately, but my last project had a 30-page ...

God, I love this. Sorry, I can't be any help to you, either, I haven't found a single mistake--well, that's not true; one thing. If possible, her sneer grows. I ...

Oh, my god. This is freaking AMAZING. First of all, the concept is brilliant. I've seen plots with emotionless people featured before (or semi-emotionless, at least), but the idea of ...

Wow, you have no idea how much I can relate to this... :) I really love this piece, it flows well, it's well-written, and to top it all off, it's ...

There were a few mistakes, but overall, this was really great. I love your imagery, your style, your characters... it's incredibly gripping. The whole thing with the scar is great... ...

There was once a time when the name “Contair” could cause a smile on its listeners faces to blossom within seconds. This feels a bit awkward. I would suggest altering ...