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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: London Bridge Prologue (*Revised*)

    Reise. I don't mean to gush, but I absolutely loved this! I read the review above mine and when I looked through I didn't see any of the mistakes she ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 'Rose'

    Hello Laura! Well I have to say I absolutely loved the description in this! It wasn't too overbearing but just enough that I knew what was happening. Congratulations to that. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It Had To Be Done

    Hello Cairo. This was pretty good, I only have a few little nit picks to point out. One: Fresh tears run down her face, burning her cheeks before evaporating into ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paradise; Lost

    This was absolutely amazing! I have no complaints at all. I'd like to think you're talking about chocolate or something of the like. It is also a bit unsettling because ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stars

    Hello Meighan. I really liked this. It was cute and short and the type of thing that gets stuck in you head. A riddle or a song verse. Like a ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mirror

    Hello icebender. Since the two people above me handled just about every mistake I noticed I will be content to simply leave my thoughts on the piece. For one, it ...

    Aug 10, 2011


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