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Re: London Bridge Prologue (*Revised*)
Reise. I don't mean to gush, but I absolutely loved this! I read the review above mine and when I looked through I didn't see any of the mistakes she ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: 'Rose'
Hello Laura! Well I have to say I absolutely loved the description in this! It wasn't too overbearing but just enough that I knew what was happening. Congratulations to that. ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: It Had To Be Done
Hello Cairo. This was pretty good, I only have a few little nit picks to point out. One: Fresh tears run down her face, burning her cheeks before evaporating into ...
Aug 14, 2011 -
Re: Paradise; Lost
This was absolutely amazing! I have no complaints at all. I'd like to think you're talking about chocolate or something of the like. It is also a bit unsettling because ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Stars
Hello Meighan. I really liked this. It was cute and short and the type of thing that gets stuck in you head. A riddle or a song verse. Like a ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Mirror
Hello icebender. Since the two people above me handled just about every mistake I noticed I will be content to simply leave my thoughts on the piece. For one, it ...
Aug 10, 2011