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Re: Little Sister Chapter 5 [EDITED]
Mem, hi. I’m here to do another review after Review Day because of work (eww work) but I think I’m more surprised that I’m actually going through on reviewing all ...
Feb 1, 2016 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 4 [EDITED]
Hi Mem, I’m here to review again to catch up with Scar because this may be my last review for Review Day. I promise I’ll review all of this so ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 3 [EDITED]
I’m here for another review, just in time for Review Day (my work is killing me whoops), so technically this is the first review that’s on time? The disclaimers still ...
Jan 31, 2016 -
Re: Little Sister Chapter 2 [EDITED]
Alrighty, it’s me again for another review! At this point I’m gonna be halfway through this by the time Review Day rolls around. Ah well, reviews are reviews, no matter ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: Little Sister chapter 1 EDITED
Alright Mem, I’m here to review your piece like you asked, before Review Day because I’m a little rough around the edges when it comes to reviewing. However, before we ...
Jan 30, 2016 -
Re: A Potion to Make You Smarter
Hi there Veeren! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your stay on YWS. It's a great place. Any, a few notes: I'm reviewing as I read, so ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: something else
Iggs bby
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: I love you
Hey there Ossum! Happy Poke-Review day! I'm here to do my best on reviewing this piece. Please note before we start the review: I am reviewing this as I am ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Ferona's World: Prologue
Hey there Myndi! A review just for you, for Poke-Review Day. So, let's just get right to it, shall we? Before I start, please not two things: One, that I ...
Jul 27, 2014 -
Re: Chapters 1 The Token (Please review! Plan on publishing so need it)
Hey there StormCrow! (Yay another review!) Okay, first off, remember that I review as I read! Secondly, if I make mistakes on the plotline because of this, don't be afraid ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. See other chapters as well)
He there Stormcrow! So, I'm reviewing this so I can /eventually/ get to Chapter 3 and get that out of the Green Room! Please note: I do not read the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: deleted #1
Hey there writer! I know this is a little early for Review Day, but I need to do six reviews before Review Day because of a competition! So, let's get ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: The Phoenix: Chapter 1
Hey there Rapunzel! I'm here for a review! (if my review sounds weird at all, please excuse it. I haven't reviewed in forever.) So, I'm gearing up to read and ...
May 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 2 (Revised)
Okay, this is long overdue, a review, just for you. (Hehe, that rhymed.) So, I've been busy, but now that I'm in a contest for reviewing, I guess I should ...
May 6, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 1 (Revised)
Okay, so I haven't read this at all, this will be my first chapter, and I also haven't read any of the other reviews (I don't like doing that), but ...
Apr 28, 2014
