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Hey Shady!! Happy RevMo :D Jerica looked at the tub in front of her hopelessly. Okay but I am clearly in the wrong mood to review this at the moment ...

Okay Shady, I gotta use a Review Template and I usually go either story or technique so I’ll use story this one. Happy RevMo!! First Impressions: So I’m genuinely surprised ...

Hey Shady!! Happy RevMo :D I love the description you have at the beginning here, with Jerica like a bedroll on the back of the horse! It’s a cool and ...

Hey Shady! I am excited to see where you’re heading with this new chapter :D Also happy RevMo haha He let out a guttural yelp, blood burbling from his gaping ...

Hey Shady!! Happy RevMo :D With all that had happened to Jerica, the thing to stop her was a boomerang haha boomerangs op Oh, gotcha, so the mentee is Kieran. ...

OH HELLO SHADY HAPPY REVMO :D Let’s see what this chapter is about! Since this is the only .5 chapter, I wonder why it’s out of order and stuff Okay, ...

Hey Shady!! Happy RevMo :P How many reviews have you done so far? XD okay let’s get into this :D One of the things that is difficult with expanding your ...

Hey Shady! Happy RevMo!! I like your description of the teleportation magic used here. Just one remark, though, haha, would Jerica technically know about cells in this world? This looks ...

Hey sound! Happy RevMo! And we’re HERE at the end! (of what you have written so far). We’ve talked about you having writer’s block for this and being unsure of ...

Hey sound! This is the second to the last one! I’m excited to see where this ends off. Wow! Another action scene, and this one is pretty well written, so ...

Heya Scar! Happy RevMo! Seems like the perfect time to review this, and since I’m a part of the YWU, I will probably be scrutinizing the plot of this as ...

Hey Shady! Happy RevMo! Last chapter ended with a ranger entering her tent with eyes full of malic or something, so I’m assuming there’s gonna be action! I would like ...

Hey sound! This last chapter part was pretty gooooood, so let’s see how this one will end up! If there’s another action scene, I’ll go ahead and break that down ...

Hey there Shady! Happy RevMo :D let’s get into this chapter!! I know you said you stopped writing on this, but I do hope I can still give some input ...

Hey sound! Happy RevMo! Let’s get into it Ooh, wow, we’re getting to the action! I know you believe your action is not good, so I’ll spend a bit of ...