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I really liked the start to your story..I'm excited to read more! Keep me posted :D

Oh and I love the thought of Lane too..! He's really fun to write and I definitely have someone in mind for him who I think you'll approve of :)

Hi Noelle :) Thanks for the advice! I've changed a few things here and there from your suggestions! It's so nice to be able to know what can be improved ...

Hi Sushi..Thanks for you reviews :) They're much appreciated. I have gone over and corrected a few things due to your suggestions! I'm glad to say it now reads a ...

Just posted chapter 2 :)

Just posted chapter 2 :)

Just posted chapter 2 :)

I've just posted chapter 2 :)

What an original idea! You could do so many things with this plot..! I love that I have no idea why it's called heart button....yet. Just going on to read ...

Thanks so much! Really happy that you loved it - I loved writing it! I'm still trying to figure the ins and outs of the reasons the Elementals and Humans ...

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I'm also glad you brought up the question of the background questions too...I think its partly so vague because I want to ...

I really loved reading this! I really like the way you've set your plot up - giving a little mystery here and there. I also like how vague it is ...

WOW! The advice is much appreciated. The main character is a girl by the way! And I've actually never thought about that you can't tell this from the first chapter ...

Thank you! For your advice and encouragement. The relief is unbelievable..haha! Will keep you posted on the next installment. :)

You're 16?!? JEEZ LOUISE! I'm impressed.