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Sagey Olive has arrived and I’m going to try Tenyo’s method of reviewing chapters this week. Let me if it’s helpful to you! Plot & Characters So, we’re still on ...

*Sage Olive has a new sage super cape that she’s trying out. Go with it, ok?* Good. You’ve started to take care with your sentence openers! Yes, yes yes. :) ...

Hi Trina. Olive here to review. I had no idea that when I read your title, Echo, that it would be about clones! Genius. I’m excited to read this already. ...

Hi there! Olive here to review. Your title caught my eye so I thought I would come and dive right in. Here goes! I like your characterisation in your first ...

*Sage Olive ambushes you from behind a large oak tree. “Show me what you’ve got Pies!” she shouts, desperate to get her next fix of your novel. You hand it ...

(Wise Sage Olive arrives on bare horseback, determined to keep you on track! She rallies behind you, waving your tournament flag and throwing plenty of refreshments your way. You both ...

OH wise and wonderful sage at your service! I’m super duper excited to get started and I will do my very best to be useful and entertaining in your great ...

Hey Zontafer! 

So - this piece immediately caught my eye. I am fantasy and prologue MAD! This looks right up my alley! I will review as I read so that ...

Hi TeenQueen! Here to review your delightful short story this evening! I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more sense to both me and ...

Hey ire123! Here to review your chapter as requested! I will review as I read so that it will make a little more sense to both me and you. Here ...

Hey Ugnee. I’m going on a rampage of prologues tonight as I LOVE them. I love reading them, writing them and reviewing them. I think they’re can be the most ...

Hi Alvarin! Ok, so I’m obsessed with prologues. They are the ultimate thing that makes me read a book. & I have high expectations! I will review as I read ...

Hey there, Wriskypump! Here to review your chapter this evening on behalf of Red Writing Hood!

I will review as I read so that it makes a lot more sense to ...

Hi calenwric! Here to review your chapter! I will review as I read so that it will make a lot more sense to be me and you, hopefully :) Here ...

Hi ComicalCrafty. I’m on a Green Room mission tonight, so I’m here to review your short story! I’m also a massive Doctor Who fan so obviously this caught my interest ...