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Shadowdale

A prison for criminal creatures
  • Prologue - Shadowdale

    Shadowdale Prison has a new inmate.

    5 min read
  • Revised Prologue - Shadowdale

    A revised version of the original prologue. I've tried less description & an earlier mention of wings! Let me know what you think :)

    5 min read
  • Shadowdale - Chapter 1

    Just the opening of chapter 1. Let me know what you think!

    9 min read
  • Chapter Sample - Shadowdale

    Just a sample from a later chapter of Shadowdale where Piper is taught to swim. I want it to be realistic and softening towards Elijah. Thoughts?

    4 min read
  • Shadowdale - A Ghost

    Rough draft of a chapter. From the middle of the book so don't worry if you don't follow.

    5 min read
  • Shadowdale - Final Chapter Snippet

    The first book comes to a close.

    3 min read


A snowball in the face is surely the perfect beginning to a lasting friendship.
— Markus Zusak, The Book Thief