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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Zero

    Sometimes poetry isn't supposed to be picked apart, understood, and planned. The words flow out your fingertips as you feel and breathe them. No offense to Jon, I'm just sayin, ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Supernova

    This was fantastic. I'm not one to post replies, unless what I read really inspires me, and this certainly inspired me a whole lot. My favorite thing is when people ...

    Jul 7, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: n1

    This is fantastic, seriously. I loved the overall tone of this poem. Everything just seemed to flow perfectly. This was my favorite part: A world where the dictionary is composed ...

    Mar 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: SOCIETY:The Ultimate Masquerade

    Like always, I do not have the faintest idea what to say in response to your masterpiece. This is absolutely incredible. I'm literaly at a loss for words. Keep up ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Writing's a pain.

    Hey! I really loved this poem. I can relate 100 percent. When i try too hard to write something substantial it comes out like vomit on paper haha. Anyways, I ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Logic of God and the plight of man

    You have a unique way of describing things and relating your own thoughts and beliefs to the unknown that is creation. I applaud you and your confidence with releasing a ...

    Jan 25, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just Forget

    This is a really great poem. You're rhyming flows so easily and smoothly and the emotions you portrayed were powerful. Keep up the great work. You're writing will influence many ...

    Jan 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Walking Through An Autumn Forest

    The imagery in this poem is very beautiful. I especially liked the last line. It was so unexpected and just hit you right in the face...I LOVED it haha. Very ...

    Jan 23, 2009


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