Odysseus310

More! Yes, there is more! More to read, more to enjoy; and so little to edit. The quality is excellent. 1. In the paragraph beginning "The air was frigid" you ...

Wow. Grim. Not what I was expecting from a Christmas story, but some people despise the holidays for the same reasons as Nick. I have to admit it was rather ...

Wow, this poem is very dark. I daresay as dark as the grave??? Heh, only kidding. Truly last words are for the living, for those in the grave cannot enjoy ...

This is quite a unique take on angels/heaven/theology. I have to agree completely with what StellaThomas mentioned in her second point--I would worry about the fate of the world being ...

One thing. Only one thing I can bring myself to say about this piece . . . that's bad, that is. Hyphens need to be doubled when separating words--or ideas, ...

Interesting. Very, very interesting--and grim, too, not only in style but also in subject matter. Overall, good! Just as Lucrezia aptly put it, though, "time for the nitpicks." 1. The ...

This was a very interesting opening. The action was good, and I could follow the course of it quite nicely--especially the highway segment, which I enjoyed thoroughly! The background story ...

First off, I just had to say that your Calvin avatar made me smile. Second, I like this work so far. It is rather grim and it features many concrete ...