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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Your Doppelgänger and You

    This. Is. Awesome. So cool! You make dopplegangers sound like a perfectly harmless pet. XD And you make it sound as if it's not a bad thing to have someone ...

    Apr 29, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Normal

    Hi cjscoot! I'm going to review your work. It was the perfect day to be starting my third year of high school It was the perfect day to start my ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Forgotten

    Hi brainchic212!! I'm going to review your work today. XD He was wearing dark jeans that were just a little too tight for the style around here He wore dark ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Emanon - Prologue

    Hi Terpsichore! I'm here to review your work. And are the people here really that quick to rip apart work? o.O It was the middle of winter and the rain ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Terrafertilis Prologue

    Hello Lord Anzius! I'm here to review your work! I looked down at the legion marching below me, from my camp site on a high cliff. You just used look ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wake Up, You're Dead

    Hi mikepyro! I'm going to review your work. XD Firstly, I have to figure out where exactly 'here' is. I think the first without the -ly would work just as ...

    Apr 28, 2009


The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma.
— Patrick Star