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Re: Your Doppelgänger and You
This. Is. Awesome. So cool! You make dopplegangers sound like a perfectly harmless pet. XD And you make it sound as if it's not a bad thing to have someone ...
Apr 29, 2009 -
Re: Normal
Hi cjscoot! I'm going to review your work. It was the perfect day to be starting my third year of high school It was the perfect day to start my ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: The Forgotten
Hi brainchic212!! I'm going to review your work today. XD He was wearing dark jeans that were just a little too tight for the style around here He wore dark ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Emanon - Prologue
Hi Terpsichore! I'm here to review your work. And are the people here really that quick to rip apart work? o.O It was the middle of winter and the rain ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Terrafertilis Prologue
Hello Lord Anzius! I'm here to review your work! I looked down at the legion marching below me, from my camp site on a high cliff. You just used look ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Wake Up, You're Dead
Hi mikepyro! I'm going to review your work. XD Firstly, I have to figure out where exactly 'here' is. I think the first without the -ly would work just as ...
Apr 28, 2009
