Octave

Hi Nightmares! You're new, aren't you? I'm Kara, nice to meet you. ^^ It's been a while since I've come to YWS, so I might be rusty at this but ...

Hello Wizkid! I'm here to review! Dirrella’s eyes fluttered open while the light slowly trickled across her face, with a sigh she swung her legs around and got out of ...

Hi Sare!! Kara here. Let's start, shall we? “Writers block.” She sighed. "Writer's block," she sighed. Rising, she grabbed her note book and trotted upstairs. She stood up, grabbed her ...

Hi Era!! Let's go on to the review, shall we? ^^ Some are Physical, others are spiritual, some benign beings seeking only a continued existence and others psychotic beasts of ...

Hi Kath! You didn't think I would ignore this after reviewing the first one, did you? :P In this highest of all chambers was a grand library, a maze of ...

Hey Kath. I was wandering around YWS and thought I'd check this out. ^^ Ganan's joints bludgeoned him with a dull, aching sensation as he slipped out of the tub ...

Hey Mira! Kara reporting for duty! I will now get to work. Tears ran down my cheeks. I sobbed furiously, trying to wipe away the liquid running down my face. ...

Hey Anti! I'm here, like I said I would be. Disgusting, he thought when he caught the scent. First up, you don't have to put thought. Just put disgusting. Anyway, ...

Hi! Let's go straight to the review, shall we? Those snivelling peasants! Let's be realistic. Nobody says that. “Hot off the press. They’re calling you ‘The Vampire of Praile.’” It ...

Hi Angels! Let's get on to the review, shall we? First up, nitpicks. My body feels stuff and it’s difficult to see through tears. Feels stuffed. Will the prize I’ve ...

Kara reporting for review duty! Haha. Just kidding. I'm going to review this because I want to. ^___^ The bitterly cold, winter wind blew hard through the snow covered forest. ...

Hey ThornedRose! Kara here. I'm going to review your work to the best of my ability. :wink: Elisabeth looked over at Dinah, who was her co-warrior in training. In the ...

Hallo! Here to review. xD Here we go. Tear marks stained her fragile face, and a sticky, salty sweat stretched across her cheeks. I think you can take out "a" ...

Hey there, Jules! Here to review. First, the nitpicks. Ryan’s antagonists grabbed her hair and pulled her head back. Antagonists? I don't think so. Use another word, please. They punched ...

Hi! First to review!! YES!! Haha. He fell to sleep. He fell asleep. The next morning had ejected him from the depths of a very discomfiting dream; one that had ...