Octave

Comments in red. The sky is alight. Blazing. The blue of it is almost gone; replaced with pink and orange. My eyes reflect the colour, every shining detail of them. ...

Comments in red. I'm so stupid, Ace Finn thought as he lay on his bed, almost relishing the feel of Tristan’s fingertips on his bare chest. I don't know what's ...

Comments in red. It is not a stress reliever or hobby. It is an addiction that has consumed my mind for as long as I can remember. Good beginning. The ...

Comments in red. Years ago, in places not even I know of, Master Keever, the daredevil of all band directors, lived and trained among the best. She was a loner ...

Comments in red. So this is a story I wrote for a contest. It had to be no more than four pages, so sorry if some parts are info dumps. ...

Comments in red. "So, what happened on the afternoon of October 31st?" the officer asked. I had to tell him the story which wasn't really a story seeing as I ...

Comments and corrections in red. This is basically the beginning of something that I hope will turn out quite lovely. Sorry about the awkward ending. :D My world is in ...

Comments in red. I laid my newly bought pages on the table between us. My ink well and pen then followed. Awkward first two sentences. Fix. All the while her ...

Demon and Beast William Butler Yeats For certain minutes at the least That crafty demon and that loud beast That plague me day and night Ran out of my sight; ...

Comments, as always, in red. I hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. Chapter 1 is coming very soon. "Long ago in a time of war, the ...

Comments in red. The moon and the stars are my true loves, the night my only companion. I'll be honest - if this is the first sentence of a novel, ...

Comments in red. Darkly, a solution: Run. Take nothing with you. Have yourself one of those all-American road tri s p, because soon you'll have... r esponsibilities. Ick. Ellipsis for ...

Comments in red. This is just a excerpt of the series I pride my self on. Comment if you want me to post every single story, EVER, on YWS. 'Cause ...

Hey Derek. Comments in red. I hope you enjoy the Prologue of my newest possible work. I know some of you might consider this an info dump(cause it is?) but ...

Comments in red. Dear Dad, I really, really miss you. It’s been 8 years now; Mom always says you are safe where you are. She says you are in a ...