Octave

Comments in red. Warning, rated 16 and older due to contents and maybe violence/gore. (Genre: Horror) I dug the object The vagueness isn't working here. in, relishing in the loud ...

Comments in red. I think I'm finished with the first chapter...have any suggestions feel free to tell me. Thanks for any reviews. Beep! Beep! w as what I heard that ...

Act 1: Origins In the city of Athens, Greece, the Parthenon stood as a temple to Athena, the virgin goddess of wisdom and strategy. In her temple, she was aided ...

Comments in red. I lay on my side along the cave’s wall, waiting for the dragon to step past me and meet my master. My arm tensed at the sound ...

Comments in red. Drip. Drip. Drip. The sound is hypnotizing, working against Aneko’s struggle for consciousness. Despite her deep desire to bl o ck out the cruel world, she can’t ...

Comments in red. “Not much of a view, is it?” John turned away from the window. “Sure it is! It’s not every day you get to watch the rain on ...

Comments in red. Hehe--look what I's found! It's teh new draft of The Wings of Darkness! ^_^ More great action, bigger plot twists (hopefully), and better writing overall! Let's all ...

Comments in red. I'm not finished yet. How do you like it? Hi, I am Liam Lumbridge and I’m 13 years of age. No no no no. This is not ...

Comments in red. Flash fiction written for a contest. All comments appreciated. :) _____________________ The Quarter The late afternoon breeze is chilly with the coming winter. I'm not so sure ...

Due to a sudden drop in actors, I had to rewrite. 3 characters have been taken from the film. SCAVENGERS (SCENE ONE) (We open to an empty field, wind rushing ...

Comments in red. The next morning I woke with a splitting headache. I groaned and sat up, holding my head between my hands. Suddenly, I doubled over and puked the ...

Comments in red. You wonder why I sleep with a goddam 357 Magnum under my pillow and a fucking Mossberg shotgun under my bed. It's an all right first sentence ...

Comments in red. I will fix the formatting to the best of my abilities. Chapter One " I h ate y ou!!!!!!!!!! " First of all - exclamation points are ...

I adore fairytale remakes, so I'm going to crit this. Comments in red. The mirror lay on the wall. The word "lay" doesn't seem to click for me here. It’s ...

Comments in red. The demonic voices ring through my head. Give in. Give up. They whisper to me sweetly. I disagree with the first reviewer. Sweetly is a good choice ...