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  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard

    it is beautiful and it gives me the image of a long walk, I love every line

    Aug 15, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    Hahaa thanks me too

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    ;)

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    Yes I know that, I go try write some poems with no rhyme

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    Hahah okay!

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: 'Sserts

    okay and yes :p

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Through the journey of a lifetime

    okay :)

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Through the journey of a lifetime

    thanks for your review

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    thankyou for reading and reviewing my poem!

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    Hey I can see no fault in 'Cause' I think I wrote that good? and thanks

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: The Willow Tree

    thank you so much

    Feb 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: I am Free

    Thanks ;)

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Home is far

    yes this was really helpful, thanks!

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, General Re: My Days

    Okay another one in this form, it was peaceful again and a pretty read. I like how you put the image in this song and that was really beautiful. It ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: The Willow Tree

    okay thank you :)

    Feb 23, 2014


To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics