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Hello! I really like this. I think the metaphor when combined with the title presents a real depth of thought in just three short lines. It doesn't feel like a ...

Hello! A really nice attempt at rhyming couplets. My one piece of advice would be research and understand 'foot'. 'Foot' is basically how syllables work in poetry, and in most ...

Hello, DissidentAggressor I'm also new to this site, so this will be a learning experience for both of us! I recognise that this is a personal poem and so I ...

Interesting use of juxtaposition here. The lack of capital letters giving an impression perhaps of apathy and defiance, and the solemness of the noun "ritual" (and the spiritual implications this ...