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Re: Lost In Black and White~ Part 1
Huuuuullo~ I like the premise so far, but personally, there was something about the opening paragraphs that just felt off to me. I guess it's probably the way she describes ...
Oct 11, 2015 -
Re: Hidden Spires: Prologue
Hullo, great work on your prologue! First of all, although your actual overall objectives and such are nice, some of your grammar does need correcting, for example in your first ...
Oct 11, 2015 -
Re: Neverland's Child
Hey there~! This is my first review, so sorry if it doesn't exactly...meet expectations. Aaanyway, before I actually begin, I'd like to mention that some of your sentences sound a ...
Oct 6, 2015