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0.0 those italics just won't work! Pretend they are there.... please? XD

Quote: The view was very beautiful, as the sun was just rising from the east hitting the snow, making a bright, blindingly beautiful glow. It was a strikingly beautiful day ...

Hey ^^ One beautiful night in the peaceful town of Dicerton an old van chugged along on the street. For a first line, it didn't really grab my attention. It ...

LOL! Hilarious. Absolutely brilliant. Apparently you are a Lizard, snionk. Go the random kittens! :lol:

Improved, though now I can see a few things that don't quite work. She didn't say thank you for her chain. She doesn't seem unpolite, so I would have thought ...

Haha! this actually made me laugh. Especially the "My feet are small children" Bit. Delightfully random :D

It's up to you, I have done both before. If it is minor, I usually just edit the original, but if I do a complete re-write I post it again. ...

*rolls on floor laughing* Only Aet could come up with something so utterly bad but strangely funny. Hehe.

LMAO! poor Matt! You guys are mean to him :(

Just so you know, I did give her permission :)

*raises eyebrows* I suppose it is Anne McCaffery-ish... heheh, which is a awesome thing, believe me. (I love the Cattini series!) Anyway, I liked this. I shall have to go ...

LMAO! I'm going to have to try that sometime. Anyway, Bravo! I loved it. Very good. *laughs* nice boots... :wink:

Oh! I remember this. It's great, it sounds like the kind of strange nightmare I would have. Well written though could do with better paragraph layout. Right. Next part.

Sieg- brilliant! I love how the storie's developing. It makes me wonder about what will happen- so many relationships going haywire! I loved the denial! Hurry up and write some ...

Wow... I have to get off now, other wise I would keep reading the whole way through. Great story, I'm really enjoying it. But Mum's telling me to get off ...