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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Wicked the Musical

    Wicked the Musical is my favorite musical. I love the story and the characters. Elphaba might be my all time favorite character from any work of fiction. The songs are ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The Begining

    I like this. It's a pretty interesting creation story. I loved that part with "the Writer", very creative. :D This sounds like a really interesting world. This story had a ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Moth and the Flame, a Tragedy

    I really liked that story. It's a really original idea. I think your word choice was excellent. The thoughts and feelings of the moth and flame were really well explained ...

    Jan 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: New Year's Romance

    That was a really cute story. The description was pretty good. I could imagine the New York City scene. I think it might be even better if you lengthened it ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: An endless dream

    That was a really good story. I enjoyed reading it. The imagery was really powerful. I felt like I was actually there in that dreamland. I'd say that the grammar ...

    Jan 1, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Childhood.

    I really like this piece. It's so true. Childhood is fleeting. I like how you used a box as a metaphor for the protection of childhood. It does seem like ...

    Dec 31, 2010


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