Nourul

i'm not a good writer myself and very new to YWS but I need to say that this poem, rhymes really good! I like it but it was kind of ...

i'm glad that you like it. thank you ! :)

thanks you for the review. yeah, i agree i tend to repeat some words in my poem. I'm quite bad at tenses and grammar but learning to be better :)

thank you for the review. i agree with most of the things you said but i'm afraid i can't explain certain things coz i wrote it a couple of years ...

Hey. Are you like seriously 16? You wrote better stories than I did ! I just like them