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Re: A day at the waterpark
Hello. I'm here for a review. I apologize in advance for my lack of vocabulary. :0 So to start, something that stood out to me was the part where it ...
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Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 1
Salutations. I'm Ash, and I am here for a review. I apologise in advance for my limited vocabulary in the review (。ŏ﹏ŏ) To begin, I really like the way the ...
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Re: Anger is Water
Hello. I'm Ash, I'm here for a review. To start, I really like how this is set up. I enjoy the center alignment and the rounded paragraphs. It's visually pleasing. ...
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Re: Chapter 8- Close Walls
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Feb 19
Okay, so I just read this story and wow… my heart was racing the whole time. It felt like I was right there with Caroline, pressed against that door, hearing ... -
Re: Counting
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Feb 19
This poem is about counting friends, but it’s really about how hard it is to keep them over time. The kid starts off with 20 friends, which is a lot, ... -
Re: waterfall
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Feb 19
This poem is intense and real. It’s about feeling like you have to take in so much—like water filling you up until you can’t handle it anymore. The whole time, ... -
Re: 𝓴𝓪𝓵𝓸𝓹𝓼𝓲𝓪
Hiiiii. This is really good. One thing I did notice is capitalization. Even in poems, you want to capitalize all of the lines. It makes it easier to follow. I ...
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Re: Blind - Chapter 1
Hello! "I'm blind. I was born like it. It makes me feel foolish and stupid since I don't know what colors are." This is a nice start, because many people ...
Feb 12
