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NotReallyHuman

Humans are sinfully stupid creatures.

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: A day at the waterpark

    Hello. I'm here for a review. I apologize in advance for my lack of vocabulary. :0 So to start, something that stood out to me was the part where it ...

    Mar 11
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The girl and the monster: Chapter 1

    Salutations. I'm Ash, and I am here for a review. I apologise in advance for my limited vocabulary in the review (。ŏ﹏ŏ) To begin, I really like the way the ...

    Mar 1
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Anger is Water

    Hello. I'm Ash, I'm here for a review. To start, I really like how this is set up. I enjoy the center alignment and the rounded paragraphs. It's visually pleasing. ...

    Mar 1
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Health Re: Chapter 8- Close Walls

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    Okay, so I just read this story and wow… my heart was racing the whole time. It felt like I was right there with Caroline, pressed against that door, hearing ...

    Feb 19
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Counting

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    This poem is about counting friends, but it’s really about how hard it is to keep them over time. The kid starts off with 20 friends, which is a lot, ...

    Feb 19
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: waterfall

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    This poem is intense and real. It’s about feeling like you have to take in so much—like water filling you up until you can’t handle it anymore. The whole time, ...

    Feb 19
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: 𝓴𝓪𝓵𝓸𝓹𝓼𝓲𝓪

    Hiiiii. This is really good. One thing I did notice is capitalization. Even in poems, you want to capitalize all of the lines. It makes it easier to follow. I ...

    Feb 19
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blind - Chapter 1

    Hello! "I'm blind. I was born like it. It makes me feel foolish and stupid since I don't know what colors are." This is a nice start, because many people ...

    Feb 12


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X